OVERTHROW!

Dec 16th, 2008

Justin said it was cool to post some pages here, so I figured I’d do that and avoid having to talk too much. Been hitting the sack at four in the morning lately. Brain is mush. Need Spider’s jumpstart pills and intelligence enhancers. And maybe some hot wings.

Me brain are anymore not smart.

Enjoy.

9 Comments

Louie

December 16, 2008 at 3:34 pm

You’re getting really good, kid– really tight and sharp with your style. I can see you getting more and more comfortable doing 11-17s, hahaha.

As for criticisms, in the first frame of that first page, though, I thought there should be details on the ground beneath that showoff kid.

Also, that guy that walked away from the kid, there seemed to be some inconsistency with the way he’s facing the kid in the first and second pages. Did he turned his back again and then swung his head around towards the kid a second time in the second frame of the second page?

I love that evil grin the kid was flashing in the last page a lot– nasty!
rey siasar

December 16, 2008 at 4:32 pm

this is amazing. theres just one thing i would like to say, why does exploding dude looked like you john? are you trying to say something?
Alex

December 16, 2008 at 4:39 pm

John explodes every time he goes to the shitter. That aside, I like how everything made sense without dialogue. Now, that’s good story telling! We can’t wait for the whole thing!
rey siasar

December 16, 2008 at 5:08 pm

oh i get it! john EXPLODES while on the shitter! hmmm, this got to have something to do with john being good at what he does with his right hand. the right hand of explosions!

yeah, everything does make sense. i knew what was happening just by looking at it once.

but john would still explode! damn!
John Amor

December 16, 2008 at 5:30 pm

You guys are weird.

Thanks for the comments and crits though. Good eye, Louie; and I was actually worried that the flow would be choppy between the first and second pages as well. Roll your mouse over the page though, and you’ll see that it’s actually page 16, and the others are 18 and 19. My bad for not labeling them.

Thanks again though, guys.
massacremike

December 18, 2008 at 4:04 am

Thanks for posting these page samples, John! Really nice work and really good to see.
zerk

December 20, 2008 at 9:41 am

pokemon balls?? hehehe, here’s a little nitpicking. the pavement on panel 1,page 16, perspective a bit off. and what louie said,
zerk

December 20, 2008 at 9:41 am

but hey, overall, they’re all good. youre getting better at this.
John Amor

December 20, 2008 at 1:54 pm

Thanks for the feedback. Happy to know you guys actually inspect my stuff.