The Comedic Element 01

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Jun 8th, 2010
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Justin Tyler is one of the hosts of Comic Book Club and a member of the comedy sketch group Side Car.  He has a thinking place with a long poster.

Amor: So the idea for this volley came from our initial chats to eventually collaborate on a comic, with the intention of chronicling the foolishness that the project began with.  I guess we can say for now that we are slowly working on a comedy comic together and safely leave it at that.

Tyler: I love the secrecy. We ARE working on a comedy comic together and I will leave it at “Hurray!”

Amor: To get the ball rolling, let me ask you this — what are some of your favorite funnies in mainstream comics?  As a comedian, your standard for junk like that might actually be pretty high, no?

Tyler: I love the comedy in the first half of the Bone series. It’s so fun and innocent and does such a good job of making you fall in love with those characters. I loved the joke-to-page ratio of the Formerly Known as the Justice League series from 2003. Peter David always manages to sneak some smart jokes into X-Factor. Early Invincible was really fun. Starman had some great jokes and was also an amazing series. Having some level of comedy, just like the real world, makes a comic a fully rounded experience.

As a comedian, I don’t think I have a higher standard for what is funny, it’s just more exposure to it. It makes me crave original humor. You can only hear so many Aquaman-is-useless-on-land jokes before you think “Check. Got it. Let’s give him a hand made of water, that’ll do it.”

Is there a difference on the artist’s end when it comes to comedy? Do you have a special joke pen?

Amor: Man, I wish I did.  Not a lot of illustrators will freely admit it, but the skill to render the wide range of emotions needed to make a comedy comic work is pretty challenging to develop.  Pros will tell you to look in the mirror, yeah well that doesn’t necessarily make it universally simple.  You mentioned Formerly Known as the Justice League as one of your favorites — my love for the BWAHAHA stuff goes back to the JLI, when I used those books as a gateway drug from Archie.  Kevin Maguire’s a complete genius at conveying the emotions needed to make Talking Head Books work.  Other favorites of mine include the genre-bending stylings in Next Wave, and the fourth-wall breakage of any Adam Warren book.

The Aquaman jokes are all good at the start, I guess… but after a while it gets stale and overdone, which really only makes it attributable to lazy writing.  And since no character would actually freely mock Aquaman to his face, it’s really just the writer mocking the character vicariously — know what I mean?  Which brings up the relevance of voice…

Tyler: Well, to be fair, there are ways of mocking Aquaman to his face. He speaks very little French, for one.

Voice. I love talking voice. Voice is essential to good storytelling. When you think of all of the most distinctive, popular characters in comics, what they have in common is a clear voice: Wolverine, Captain America, Batman, Deadpool, Joker, there are others. These are the characters that jump off the page: you can almost hear their “voices” as you read, especially the bubs.

But giving voice to a character is hard. It’s a combination of language, attitude, worldview, accent, emotion, motivation and on the artist’s end, design, look, movement and a ton of other small details that make up the character. It’s so easy to miss one or two of these or over-emphasize others and then the character ends up out of balance and bland or fake.

Aquaman is a good example of this. In many writer’s hands he just doesn’t have a strong voice: he just seems like an underwater superman. Or dying secretly dying with an octopus face. But you look at a mini-series like Peter David’s Aquaman: Time and Tide and he has a clear character, a strong voice and it’s just amazing work. It’s a must read, even though he’s just a bâtard poisson muet…. you know what I mean.

Amor: Hehah! Indeed, I do.  In contrast to that though, something that annoys me a lot, is when a writer will inject too much of himself into a character.  And though it may still be funny in the context of the story, certain characters simply don’t say certain things.  In Whedon’s Astonishing X-Men, Wolverine tells Armor to step up her game or else she’ll be transferred to Excalisuck, or something to that effect.  That’s a funny joke… but Wolverine doesn’t say that.  Xander says that.  Buffy banter does not a good X-comic make.

Tyler: Yeah, definitely. Wolverine is not great with banter. He’s got a great stand up comedy act though. Sort of a gruff Carrot Top.

Every writer brings their personal take to the character but the best writers explore the voice through the character rather than laying their personal voice on top of the character. But Wolverine saying “Excalibullshit” would be pretty cool too.

6 Comments

  • SullyE

    Formerly Known as has to be one of the funniest comics I’ve ever read. That said, I don’t think anything will quite get me as much as Nextwave did.

    It’s interesting to note that Image supposedly discourages funny/parody books. Apparently they don’t sell too well or something. Nextwave’s sales bear that argument out a bit.

  • johnamor

    Yeah, I hear it got cancelled coz it wasn’t really hitting the numbers… and Ellis and Immonen aren’t exactly the cheapest guys around.

    Image won’t do parodies… except of “I am an Avenger” posters :p

  • Alex Cipriano

    FREEZE FRAME HIGH FIVE!

    Also, Peter David is an awesome writer. X-Factor won’t be the same without him. The funny parts make X-Factor X-FACTORED!

  • Lloyd

    Well everyone is saying comics related stuff… my post is not limited to comics… but before anything, i found a spider-man issue (or so i think it was… forgot who the writer was)…BUT i am VERY sure he loved the Looney Tunes cartoons. I can’t exactly remember the whole thing but he was able to sneak some “Looney” lines for Spidey. I remembered he told some military bozos..”Oh out buwwets allready?”, “This means war!” and the famous “That’s all folks!” I was grinning from ear to ear when i caught these lines..lol!

    Anyway, in my humble opinion you can never be out of place or even time when you watch a Tex Avery short. When he went wild at MGM during the 50′s, he was able to smack the crap outta Disney. Well Tex was wise enough to position his product better than Disney. Cartoons during those times were only accessible through local cinema… and WHO watches the local cinema? Grown ups of course! Well Disney can still get a few laughs out of the funny situations his characters are put into… BUT not Tex… his cartoons KNOWS they’re cartoons. It’s timeless. His tomorrow series IS even funnier now than it was during the 50′s.

    For me, comic writers of today who want to inject some comedy like the one above should watch a ton of Chuck Jones shorts. For me, he’s the only guy who excelled at “verbal” jokes. His characters don’t have to be splatted in half or beaten to a pulp just to get a few laughs. Proof to that, try watching “Rabbit Seasoning” even his titles are funny to start with. And for artists looking for that “special joke pen”… I recommend watching “One Froggy Evening”, “Duck Amuck”, “A Bear for Punishment” and “Robin Hood Daffy” and oh..some Bob Clampett will help too… “Tortoise beats by a Hare.” Of course you have to change it to super hero comic versions since they’re all cartoons, but the expressions are there for you to absorb..and yeah!..the Road Runner series is quite good too….

  • johnamor

    Excellent point about Avery and Jones there, man. The comedic timing and oftentimes deadpan humor in the older WB cartoons are just a thing of beauty.

    Not surprisingly, one of my favorite comedy writers in comics today is Dan Slott, who actually started out writing Ren and Stimpy material!

  • Lloyd

    I’m a regular visitor of John Kricfalusi’s blog who also created Ren and Stimpy. He’s a Bob Clampett purist and IS the most brutal animator I know anywhere. His blog is a treasure trove of animation and other funny stuff goodness… and about comics… I’m not so much in tuned sa mga super hero comics humour, pero Harvey Kurtzman or si Hank Ketcham of Dennis the Menace fame can show you good staging.. .especially comedy staging… to get the most impact.

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