Page 1: yes i agree with marcom..now that he mentioned it in boards..the shadows on the clothes on the girl seems to look more like a design element rather than a shadow..and i think you don’t need to put shadows at her shoulder being in free fall and all..and i’d think that you should’ve put a thin boundary between the shadows and the outline of her sleeve (panel 4)

Page 2: again marcom is right your shadows seem arbitrary it seems like it’s an “aesthetic shadow” rather than “light source” shadow…if your idea was to create a shadow over the girl because of the ship hovering over her..then i’d suggest a very thin slanting leinilish

http://comicartcommunity.com/gallery/details.php?image_id=33356

*look at the hatching on wolvie’s left chest..see the thin hatching?..that’s what i meant.*

hatching over the most part of her shoulder and some parts of her face instead of the large blacks.

Page 3: same as my comment on page 2..but only for panel last panel (6?)

Page 4: i think the shading style or shadow style on panel 6 (the effect of speed) would make an awesome shadow for the clothes..it looks alive..rather than the static shadows the clothes have.

Page 5: the shadows for the clothes on panel 2 looks an “aesthetic shadow” i think it would’ve looked good if the blacks didn’t “eat up” the whole of the sleeveless outfit..giving it a black color..black ba jd ang color sa iyang sleeveless?

Page 6:panel 2..black ba jd ang color sa iyang shirt or costume?..if i think about it..murag color sya rather than shadow.

Page 7: i think you should use the shadow style on panel 5 on the stairs sparingly than often like what happens on the next page.

Page 8: the walls…i think the shadow style used doesn’t look good on the wall

well that’s my honest crits..im no jim lee, im no joe mad or a Leinil yu..but that’s just me..or bacn it’ll all look awesome once the colors are in.